There seems to be too much going on. It is easier for me to concentrate on small pieces of writing outside the maelstrom of the core of my creativity. That is why I find the writing group something that helps me focus to create these small pieces. Sometimes this is not enough and I am left delving into the pot with multiple strands of stories and ideas and what comes out is a massive tangle. I have been trying to use the small writing projects to tease out a few of these strands but they end up hinting at a complex world. Army eater was an amalgam of a few of these. This had begun as an idea around a story teller. I ended up putting him in together with the inventor, the princess, the soldier, the every day man, the gardener and the madman.

This is the start of the story tellers journey.

What was left unsaid
In the beginning we were made to rule. We were made to bring the whole World under the dominion of man. Before you say, “And look where that’s got us!” wait one second and ponder this. Ask yourself a question, ‘Is this really how it’s meant to be?’ Is having dominion of the Earth meant to be domination? Have you ever asked yourself about our inception…before our dawning, and why we were put here? When the World was in flux and our starting point was the birth of an answer. Where we were the diadem sent to subdue the upheaval. To rule. To subdue the powers that gripped the Earth like a vice. Their principality a colony of evil intent. And into this World we were dropped like a seed with all the DNA to counter the terror.
But our voice was twisted and instead of rulers we became the ruled. All vestige of our beginning was suffocated until it became myth, a mere breath, a wisp of thought rather than a raging fire in our belly. Until all was under the dominion of D’Cato and The Order.
But the seed of the story lived. All hope seemed squashed but words lived on. Weak impressions that would lead to actions. Single ideas that would instil strength. A word would come and inspire a determination to stand up.
But all the time where these actions were noticed the response would be swift and brutal.
You see… the words of the story lived in everyone but the story had been locked away so securely that the locked chest, in the locked cupboard, in the locked tower, in the closed part of the castle, in the forgotten corner of the kingdom, in that overlooked and unkempt part of their lives was left well alone and people accepted their slavery.
However, these words joined. Single acts of bravery, kindness, beauty caused the story to be reborn in one. One who treasured words and wove them together. One who travailed to reach those forgotten places and opened the crumbling wing, who braved the disintegrating tower, who broke the cupboard doors and ripped open the chest and breathed in the story long and hard. And the story lived again.
When you have the words of freedom do you lock them away once more? Or do you sing them to the World. A World that needed to know. One insignificant life with the story of life…a precious gift.

What was said!
‘Where does a story begin?’
A story has no beginning, it just is!
But the telling needs to start somewhere. Where do you start the story of what has always been. How to unfold the whole of history without filling a library?
Let me begin!
In the beginning was the story. But before this story could ever be read, or told, or enjoyed, or believed, breathed in and savoured in all its rich and diverse beauty, it was locked away. What replaced it was the toil of man. Within the toil other tales were born, ones that filled our head with adventure, of love, of trial and riches, ones to distract us from the grind of life and the tears of servitude.’
Sim watched his father weave his words. Every eye in the room unblinking, every stare transfixed. These were new words. Words of fire, of belief, of hope, of expectation, of longing.
The stage had been crudely erected in the midst of the dismal hovel they had found before nightfall. They were welcomed and the room was soon crammed with a host of the destitute and lost. Loose woven clothes worn layer upon layer, each not enough to keep out the merest chill but worn in bundles that made the slightest of people look misshapen. The filth of their existence was worn on their skin.
He told them their own tales, stories of courage and daring, epics that spoke of old fears and terrible creatures, a lyrical narrative that would lift them for a time out of their cruel existence and give them solace for their woes.
Sim knew the stories. In every region different legends or the same fables told differently. Wherever they travelled stories were their currency. Stories kept Sim and his Father fed and they fed people with a fire of longing for something that had been lost. That is if no soldiers were present.
The night had been a success. The people who had shuffled in in subdued huddled silence had left with a light behind their eyes and walked straighter and taller. Sim thought back to his Father’s first words that evening and tried to memorise some of the phrases. He’d not heard them before…In the beginning was the ….story. The acorn seed he’d held aloft to represent the story and how he’d tucked it away in his breast pocket closest to his heart.

What was hidden
Sim ran from room to room. Something was not right, some new curiosity that had roused him in his sleep. All these rooms were familiar, the long stone corridors led to the richly lavish rooms to his right and left. Dark panelled wood sprang from the walls and ornate tapestries hung all around woven before his eyes. He knew the pictures. He could tell the story of every one and every variation of that tale. Doors opened at his merest touch. He knew the rooms but this night something was different. There was a new story…one he didn’t know and it was calling to him from somewhere in the house of his…
“Sim! Time to wake up!”

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2 Responses to Playing with ideas around a theme

  1. Sarah Golbey says:

    i like the way you put your words into short stories, you then have the what, why, if, when, how…. You can as a person reading this go into it again and take it out, understand it in your own way and put it back again. I don’t mean to change it, I mean that every person has a different way of interpretation. Its deep and I found this piece widening my out look on certain things I hadn’t even thought about, but you have left an opening…….cant wait for the next bit!!

    • admin says:

      The Princess is next – might work on each character’s starting place and then revisit each character again after that. Or I might not…like you said I have left an opening for people to imagine, to question, to interpret. Thanks Sarah for your comment.

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